Thursday, 17 December 2015
Tuesday, 15 December 2015
Wednesday, 9 December 2015
Tuesday, 8 December 2015
taecher feedback on draft
Teacher feedback on draft
Positives
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Negatives
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Good paced editing
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Panning is too shaky.
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Variety of shot types
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Lighting in bedroom scenes is too low and is grainy.
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Editing makes meaning clear
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Black and white in middle does not suit.
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Good acting
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Mise-en scene is not always correct e.g. Locations (framing issue).
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Good transition between narrative and performance shots.
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There is a mistake with lip syncing in one shot.
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Some transitions do not work very well.
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Could develop on ending.
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Fill in blanks.
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Improve sting shot.
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Include more shots of the nail.
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Need lighting to be more continues
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Camera woman’s shadow in shot.
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Wednesday, 2 December 2015
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